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Post by Ivy on Sept 3, 2009 15:06:16 GMT -5
Here's your chance to show all of us how creative you can be whether it's a poem, short story, drawing or whatever your creative mind can think of!! So be creative and those who submit their work will be in a random drawing for a special prize at the end of each month! We will start this in August. So have fun and can't wait to see what you guys come up with! ;D
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Post by My soul for a cookie on Sept 3, 2009 17:26:58 GMT -5
I was watching this anime and it had a little kid bouncing a ball at the end, which provided the inspiration for this really short poem
The round ball bounces my heart gives out the children play tag I fall down then I die a slow, slow death you don't cry with the rest
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Post by ilovestark on Sept 4, 2009 20:06:34 GMT -5
I was thinking of how most girls who have had their heart broken too many times seem to have an iron guard against jerks who are out to just be mean. So, here goes.
Her Guarded Castle
My desire is Guarded By a castle so strong.
My love is Trapped By a castle so long.
She has no Want to be Rescued by me.
She has no Need to be Captured by me.
The maiden Wallows in her Silence.
The maiden Succumbs to her Pain.
I cross the Spiky trail That is to my lady's heart.
I cross the Spiky trail To my love's guarded castle.
I fight her Iron guard in hopes To win her.
I fight her Rock solid defense in hopes To keep her.
I reach the Thorns that entomb Her castle.
I reach the even Stronger guard That holds her soul.
She will never give in. She will never love me. I cannot break her defenses. I cannot end her pain.
My desire Is guarded By a castle so strong. So long is my torture, So long is her independence, That my lady's iron defenses Will never give away the Guarded castle that is her heart.
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Post by blinky on Sept 5, 2009 17:03:44 GMT -5
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Post by blinky on Sept 5, 2009 17:05:54 GMT -5
I made this when the song was popular
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Post by hng on Sept 5, 2009 18:38:21 GMT -5
these are really good guys.
ilovestark - I really like that poem.
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Post by My soul for a cookie on Sept 6, 2009 10:29:19 GMT -5
Harmless nip I try to be good I try to act normal I try to be the bigger person But when I make One little mistake One harmless nip ruins it all
One harmless bite Will send you reeling away One tiny taste Sends you running from me
I say I’m sorry I try to pay The proper price The price you paid
But you won’t listen And all I can do is watch from afar And pray I pray you find your own way
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Post by Ivy on Sept 7, 2009 9:01:00 GMT -5
They are all really good. You are all very talented. ;D
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Post by My soul for a cookie on Sept 7, 2009 16:01:28 GMT -5
Corridors I’m walking down a corridor There’s a million open doors As I walk on by I close those doors Know they weren’t the ones for me
Some had shown provocative men Others beheld false friends I didn’t want those futures I knew what I wanted And it didn’t involve short bursts of lustful light And long periods of dark
I finally got to the end The last door hung ajar And I saw through it love Love in its purest form A man who loved me A babe born of light And indomitable strength
I knew this was the door I wanted And as I stepped on through I was not dismayed to see Numerous obstacles layed out for me For I knew it wouldn’t be easy But I know that I will thrive In this newer, darker corridor Leading to a bright new life
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Post by ilovestark on Sept 7, 2009 22:42:04 GMT -5
Ooh cookie I really love the corridors. That's awesome ;D Here's one that I created when I made a poem in Old English for class.
Call of a Lost Soul
Come to me, Thy word is Thy safehouse. Hearken, I Shall keep Thee in my Broken, broken heart. Come to thy Paradise, o Master of all. I shall be with Thee until Thy God rains Upon thee in Peaceful death. Come to thy Hope, my other half. I shall never Judge thee in Thy sorrows. Thy heart is Thy savior, for Thine is true In love. I will love Thee for eternity And I will hold Thee in these Arms 'till thy God kills all, But he shall spare thee, For thine is true In love....
So ya.... It could probably use some work..... ;D
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Post by ilovestark on Sept 7, 2009 22:44:05 GMT -5
these are really good guys. ilovestark - I really like that poem. and thank you... ;D
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Post by vilmarys on Sept 11, 2009 15:56:55 GMT -5
wow im gone for a bit and look at what i find.....Great Job!!!! ;D
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Post by musicislove on Sept 13, 2009 14:43:40 GMT -5
Okay, so this is a pretty quick poem i made, and Im not really what people usually call er "good" but hey, im trying. So here it is I feel left in the dark You can't see me in this disaster I think that you are blind to all that has transpired The sweat of the innnocent The tears of the delusional im a ghost to you now Now that we're done for I feel stuck in the mud I can't get out Caged like an animal Needing to shout needing to shout Just for the key To figure out How to get out of you and me Your disease is spreading Spreading through my every vein Making me cry Cry again I cannot breath Your suffocating me Im the fly caught in your web I swivvel and I squirm But it only gets worse Im caught in your everlasting quick sand Someone grabs me out But you just keep pulling me back in Er, this is hard for me, so please don't make fun...><
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Post by ilovestark on Sept 13, 2009 21:34:30 GMT -5
Good job! I especially love the last stanza, it really expresses the metaphorical language of your emotions. And er I don't know about anyone else here, but aren't you not allowed to put down other people for what they post? I'm just saying...... Anyways, good job and you should write poetry more often ;D
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Post by musicislove on Sept 15, 2009 18:36:27 GMT -5
Good job! I especially love the last stanza, it really expresses the metaphorical language of your emotions. And er I don't know about anyone else here, but aren't you not allowed to put down other people for what they post? I'm just saying...... Anyways, good job and you should write poetry more often ;D Thanks so much That is a huge relief And yeah, im pretty sure there is a rule on that. Your really good too, and im glad to see all of the different poems you write. You should make a book or something im pretty sure im not the only one who would buy it!
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