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Post by vilmarys on Jan 4, 2010 15:15:28 GMT -5
Here's your chance to show all of us how creative you can be whether it's a poem, short story, drawing or whatever your creative mind can think of!! So be creative and those who submit their work will be in a random drawing for a special prize at the end of each month! So have fun and can't wait to see what you guys come up with! ;D
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Post by ilovestark on Jan 5, 2010 23:01:08 GMT -5
okay, this one i wrote for a friend of mine. her bf cheated on her and i wrote this as if in my perspective. tell me what you think How Blind How blind was I Not to see how You played me Like a guitar. How stupid was I Not to see how You loved her Like you said you did me. How deaf was I Not to hear how Your voice was Flat when you talked to me. How wrong was I Not to understand That you left my side For her. How horrible was I Not to convince You to stay here Instead of there. How confused was I Not to understand The meanings Behind your words. How selfish was I Not to want to Share you with A one-night stand. How naïve was I Not to take any Of your love, But I gave you mine. All of it.
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Post by vilmarys on Jan 6, 2010 16:32:41 GMT -5
it always sucks when you get cheated on you so i really like this poem. great job ilovestark!
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Post by Amante dei Libri on Jan 7, 2010 20:38:46 GMT -5
This is a clapping game my friend Kaitie and I wrote. It roughly goes to the tune of "Miss Susy had a Steamboat"
My zombie had no eyes To see the flesh he ate So never did he fall for any zombie hunter's bait
My zombie had a book That he did eat And it did taste of old man feet
My zombie had a dog Bingo was its name And when he ate my brother-in-law I knew he was insane
My zombie had a house That once belonged to Bill And now and then we go there to chill
My zombie had some shoes Though he never ran But he was still fast enough to kill my Great Aunt Anne
So if you see my zombie Tell me where he can be found My # is at 1-800-6FT-UNDERGROUND
This is what happens when you get bored and start making zombie rhymes. ;D
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Post by vilmarys on Jan 8, 2010 15:24:49 GMT -5
This is a clapping game my friend Kaitie and I wrote. It roughly goes to the tune of "Miss Susy had a Steamboat" My zombie had no eyes To see the flesh he ate So never did he for for any zombie hunter's bait My zombie had a book That he did eat And it did taste of old man feet My zombie had a dog Bingo was its name And when he ate my brother-in-law I knew he was insane My zombie had a house That once belonged to Bill And now and then we go there to chill My zombie had some shoes Though he never ran But he was still fast enough to kill me Great Aunt Anne So if you see my zombie Tell me where he can be found My # is at 1-800-6FT-UNDERGROUND This is what happens when you get bored and start making zombie rhymes. ;D hahahaha i love it!!!!
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Post by ilovestark on Jan 17, 2010 14:22:32 GMT -5
that's one amazing poem amante dei libri ;D good job!
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Post by ilovestark on Jan 17, 2010 14:25:46 GMT -5
alright i doubt i can compete with amante dei libri's poem but here's another one Wrong Guesses I thought you had Loved me. I thought you had Saved me. I thought you had Healed me. I guess I was Wrong. I thought you were Amazing. I thought you were Beautiful. I thought you were Trustworthy. I guess I was Wrong. I thought we had Something. I thought we had Love. I thought we had Honesty. I guess I was Wrong. I thought we were Perfect. I thought we were Equal. I thought we were Safe. I guess I was Wrong. I thought I had Darkness. I thought I had Problems. I thought I had Abnormalities. I guess I was Wrong. I thought I was Lost. I thought I was Lonely. I thought I was Hopeless. I guess I was Wrong. I seem to make The wrong guesses. I seem to make The wrong decisions. I seem to love The wrong person. I seem to love The absent connection. You seem to forget That I’m okay on my own. You seem to forget That I’m healing without you. You seem to live On the pain I receive. You seem to live On the breaks in my heart. You never help me. You only hurt me. You never save me. You only convict me. You never love me. You only hate me. You never remember me. I’m forgetting you. well this one i wrote just because i could. mainly i wrote this from my heart because i have felt all of this before. So i hope you like it
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Post by ylef on Jan 31, 2010 13:25:51 GMT -5
you're so creative guys, I love them!!!
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Post by Ivy on Apr 8, 2010 18:11:08 GMT -5
The winner for the month of January is........... Amante De Libri!
Congratulations!
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