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Post by My soul for a cookie on Aug 8, 2009 15:24:34 GMT -5
I get mixed responses for this poem....
Lullaby
Sing to me a lullaby Sing to me a song Rock me to sleep in your arms Whisper sweet dreams into my ears
Carry me to peaceful dreams To a time and place Where the faeries and the nymphs exist Where the lions come out to romp and play
Come with me to my dreams Succumb to my infantile please Play with me in my thoughts Come sleep with me forever
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Post by vilmarys on Aug 8, 2009 15:34:14 GMT -5
I get mixed responses for this poem.... Lullaby Sing to me a lullaby Sing to me a song Rock me to sleep in your arms Whisper sweet dreams into my ears Carry me to peaceful dreams To a time and place Where the faeries and the nymphs exist Where the lions come out to romp and play Come with me to my dreams Succumb to my infantile please Play with me in my thoughts Come sleep with me forever I like this one especially for kids ;D
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Post by musicislove on Aug 9, 2009 14:10:32 GMT -5
I love it
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Post by musicislove on Aug 9, 2009 14:13:39 GMT -5
I warn you, do not take the first verse of this poem literally. I don't feel like that anymore >.< Hidden Darkness Trying to find a place to hide Hiding intentions of suicide Burning the rabid heart inside Trying to get myself to fly I pretend everyday My life is okay Searching I pray My pain will fade from black to gray Shrouding myself in a silver cloud Listening to falsehoods I’m screaming so loud All the while knowing my mind isn’t sound Hoping desperately that I am not found WOW! AWESOME! You are soooo good! I absolutely love this
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Post by My soul for a cookie on Aug 9, 2009 19:35:46 GMT -5
thank you again, everyone >.< for your imput. The lullaby one is a personal favorite of mine, especially since I wish that I was at times. Next....
Cupid’s bane
My soul is closed off to you You’ll never touch my heart I’m locked away in a tower Hiding from cupid’s dart
Forever cupid will shoot at me And forever he will miss I think it’s time to call it quits For not even the angel of love Can make us kiss
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Post by vilmarys on Aug 9, 2009 20:13:38 GMT -5
thank you again, everyone >.< for your imput. The lullaby one is a personal favorite of mine, especially since I wish that I was at times. Next.... Cupid’s bane My soul is closed off to you You’ll never touch my heart I’m locked away in a tower Hiding from cupid’s dart Forever cupid will shoot at me And forever he will miss I think it’s time to call it quits For not even the angel of love Can make us kiss I like this one too reminds me of how i feel at times, lol
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Post by My soul for a cookie on Aug 9, 2009 20:53:26 GMT -5
thank you again, everyone >.< for your imput. The lullaby one is a personal favorite of mine, especially since I wish that I was at times. Next.... Cupid’s bane My soul is closed off to you You’ll never touch my heart I’m locked away in a tower Hiding from cupid’s dart Forever cupid will shoot at me And forever he will miss I think it’s time to call it quits For not even the angel of love Can make us kiss I like this one too reminds me of how i feel at times, lol Same. Only usually I'm the one being rejected >.>
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Post by My soul for a cookie on Aug 13, 2009 11:33:59 GMT -5
Peices
I searched for the peices The peices that make up me The plaids...the stripes...the polka dots But I can't find them All there is is an outline And a dirty, corrupted black core
I scour the ground for my peices Peices of my....dirty soul But the only peice I find is the white of hope So tiny it could pass through the eye of a needle
I hug myself to keep what's left together Make beleiving that there was someone out there to help me Focusing soley on that white peice Because being broken and hoping is better Than living without the promise of tomorrow
Sorry I missed posting yesterday and possibly the day before ( I can't remember that far back DX)
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Post by klove on Aug 14, 2009 1:49:51 GMT -5
Here's a poem i wrote in HS for my senior english class (Creative Writing)
THIS LOVE
It flows like blood Through my aching veigns. It vibrates through my bones When I whisper your name. It runs so deep; My love for you.
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Post by klove on Aug 14, 2009 1:51:31 GMT -5
Here's another one I wrote for my HS senior English class (Creative Writing)
FACING YOURSELF
Step after step Into that dark cold alley That's when you'll find Who you really are When there's a dead end In front of you and the chilling shadows at your back You'll find out the truth About what lies in your heart.
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Post by klove on Aug 14, 2009 2:04:24 GMT -5
ok so, again in my HS Creative Writing class.... I was sitting on my desk (yes ON my desk) and thinking about all the BS that has happened with my ex bfs... Well most if not all of them have lied to me about something MAJOR. So here's this little 4 liner poem, spoken between and man and a woman. (I don't remeber if I ever titled it, but its the only poem i've written that I know by heart..)
"Baby I love you." "Your lying." "Baby, I'd never lie to you." "See, your lying right now."
Really short and simple, but my teacher at the time said it spoke volumes.
Let me know what you all think.
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Post by Ivy on Aug 14, 2009 9:11:12 GMT -5
Here's another one I wrote for my HS senior English class (Creative Writing) FACING YOURSELFStep after step Into that dark cold alley That's when you'll find Who you really are When there's a dead end In front of you and the chilling shadows at your back You'll find out the truth About what lies in your heart.I really like it.
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Post by My soul for a cookie on Aug 14, 2009 9:39:13 GMT -5
Wow! those were all amazingly good. I love the one with the lying.
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Post by vilmarys on Aug 14, 2009 14:48:28 GMT -5
They are both good! I really like "Facing Yourself." It's nice to see in writing what most of us feel!
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Post by ilovestark on Aug 16, 2009 0:45:31 GMT -5
Alright, here's a poem I wrote
You Make me Feel
How can you make My heart melt every time I see you? How can you cause me to hear My own heartbeat When you say my name? How can I be so Serious around you But you make me so happy?
How can you give Me wings Even when I have had the worst day? How can you possibly Make me panic When I see your smile? How is it that you let me See the true me Inside?
You make me feel, You make me want, You bring out the best in me, You make me feel.
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